Cloud

I am a small cloud

my hair looks like a clown

im very quiet, when i walk there is no sound

I like to wander around and around

Im white annd nice and I like to blow kites if i see them in sight.

       Long walk

 

Hi this week i am learning about personification and this is my writing about a 14 year old stuck in the desert trying to find clean water

barely feel my legs, it felt numb, especially with the sun hitting my body, surrounding me with hot air making it more difficult to breathe. My chest felt cramped like someone was grabbing onto it and squeezing it with their bare hands. Suddenly, my head was spinning like a roller coaster. I Fell. My eyes slowly drifted to sleep, I couldn’t take it anymore, this desert is too much, I might as well die here. About two hours passed. I slightly opened my eyes, someone was carrying me, I couldn’t see his face as I was on his back, I didn’t mind though, I was too dead and numb that I couldn’t feel anything but only a slight fear that he was either a murderer or a hallucination. 

Then, I was fully awake now, I was in a small cottage surrounded by lots of sand that filled the front door like a swimming pool. “Finally you’re awake” He said, concerned. I turned my head and saw that it was a man staring down at me. I cautiously tried to get out of the couch, although the comfort of the couch holding me with their soft arms made me stay. “WHO ARE YOU?!” I screamed, “TELL ME WHO YOU ARE NOW!” I demanded, “But first, do you have any water?” I didn’t know what to do, I knew I couldn’t trust him, but all I knew was that my throat was gonna kill for even a slightest drop of water. The man gave me some water to drink. The water was like a cure to my throat. After the man gave me water we started talking. He told me that his name was Johnathan. He also told me to be careful when I go outside. He says there are many sand storms around this area. 

After we had a talk he gave me some water for the walk. When I left the small cottage I went back to walking. It was getting late so I went and slept near a dead bush. I had a weird but fun dream. I had a dream that I was swimming in a clear lake filled with rocks. 

BOOM! KPOW! Did you know that NanoGirl and Genesis energy came to Wesley Primary School? Well NanoGirl and her crew came to Wesley Primary to show us their astonishing science tricks.

 First, we had to set up the stage for NanoGirl. After we set up the stage we had to go to the assembly. When we got inside for the assembly we saw NanoGirl and her friends. Later on NanoGirl and her friends were talking about what our power would be? my power would be super speed like Usain Bolt.

After that, NanoGirl’s  friends told us their superhero names which was Atomic Arissa and Rocket Girl. My favourite experiment was when Atomic Arissa lit her hand on fire. They needed water and bubbles for this experiment. When everyone saw this experiment their mind was blown into a million pieces. The fire went so high that it almost touched the roof.